There is a thin line between like and love
I am afraid its vanishing.
Life was peaceful in its own way
I dont know why I wept holding you.
They say, people come, people go
I say, please dont go.
There might be a day when the line is gone
Only to find you gone with it?
19 comments:
Wow, that's actually pretty well written.
We live, and we love.
Realization is hard to come by, but is it just to refrain once it does?
What good is love that is hidden from the self?
What good is desire that is not expressed?
Who could refrain that had a heart to love, and in it the courage to make love known?
The expression is genuinely beautiful. Kudos.
If life was like a placid lake always, we'd never appreciate it. It's these attachments and emotions that make the journey worthwhile. The tricks of the heart never had any rules. It never had any boundaries. The lines were never there, we notice it only when it's irreparable.
I wonder why I didn't see this before. I guess you miss a lot if you choose to be myopic and lazy. Well put!
Excellent writing. Extremely romantic and emotional.
So when are you getting married to your sweetheart?
@Anonymous
Thank ou for being very generous with your comment.
I dont intend to marry anyone anytime soon.
Very lucid, very subtle.
Is the trouble worth the mettle?
Inspiration you may be
but it is Exasperation you shall feel
if your heart desires for something
while your words express nothing.
Small maybe Cupid's arrows
but ignore them not for painful they can be
Forget not that little things that set your soul free.
Flowing tears and rolling years may relieve you of the tears you today see
But there will always be moments which will remind you of lost glee.
Thank you.
@ Nicholas, thats very well put.
@Spurthi : BEsto for whenever you do intend to! And you'll get generous wishes then as well :) :)
Take not my words as a musing,
take them as a warning,
from as someone who has been there
it is hard to explain why it is difficult to find love anywhere.
Make the move even if it doesn't really fit in your groove
for love once lost is never found again.
The irony is that you mentioned that the line may yet be an Illusive Delusion.
But then, there are so many in life. Sigh!
The melancholy of love found and love lost, well captured.
published my comments on my blog. hope that is fine with you
@Nicolas- Ofcourse you ought to, its beautiful.
Gunny Bag still ready cousin. You will have my full support.
Is this how its seen from the other side?
There is but a thin line between love and like
I am afraid i have not seen it.
I do not know why I wanted to hold on to you, when you said you do not want to.
The day I go away, there is only a big wall...
I just piggybacked on your style..you may choose not to accept the comment :)
Excellent writing Spurthi ....
Well said!
Everything seems to be fine, you feel you know what exactly they mean but things starts getting complicated once you start caring for someone. At that instant on, like and love go on a collision course, the remnants of which scatter through out our lives making us what we are now.
ppl come...ppl leave...but when some leave, life is not the same anymore.
The lines convey the most understood concept in an even simpler language but you got to feel the words to fathom the real depth of the lines. Commend!!
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